tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5762369013005547088.post4508422774243964299..comments2024-02-15T16:04:18.499-08:00Comments on Sex Mages and Other Strangeness: HopeSalamando Flameshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04600017462795449281noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5762369013005547088.post-8197310942317550362016-12-11T17:27:22.307-08:002016-12-11T17:27:22.307-08:00I've condensed separate entries into one to be...I've condensed separate entries into one to better organize the archive.<br /><br />Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. :)<br /><br />I know some readers are just dying for a cathartic story where an all-powerful goody-good Sex Mage punishes all the bad women, but Hope is not that character, and the SMW has never been that sort of wish-fulfillment universe.<br /><br />I haven't posted any "furry nation" story, although I so have one started. I do have a set of Captioned Images set in the nation of New Bestia, so that's about as close as it gets so far.<br /><br />Officially, Hope actually ends up joining the Special Task Force, so she does become one of the "superheroes" of the world, even if only in a supporting role. That said, I haven't done any actual STF stories, either, so make of it what you will.Salamando Flameshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04600017462795449281noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5762369013005547088.post-65730310203844293172016-12-11T05:16:07.905-08:002016-12-11T05:16:07.905-08:00Sections 4-6 seem to have been added to this story...Sections 4-6 seem to have been added to this story since the last comment.<br />Great characters in this story. It seemed a little disappointing when the queen came and overpowered Hope, but maybe it's for the better, since it prevents Hope from making a morally questionable power-grab in the town.<br />A followup in the furry nation might be interesting. (Come to think of it, have you written anything set in the furry nation before?)Etaquahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16248070512709820239noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5762369013005547088.post-11435760359976882522016-02-04T15:19:07.194-08:002016-02-04T15:19:07.194-08:00Great story. Love the comments. I would like to ...Great story. Love the comments. I would like to see Hope take over the city and reign over the town folk. Have to say I love teasing with a happy ending when deserved. Some conflict, flights, and powers being used just would add whipped topping to this steamy hot chocolate mug of a story. Hope could try to keep the place magically walled off or turned into a Stepford Magic kind of scenario. Awesome job. Red Leaderhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16747755397949638002noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5762369013005547088.post-40995315728905704752016-01-25T08:25:05.166-08:002016-01-25T08:25:05.166-08:00Remove tho note at the bottom. This is great as is...Remove tho note at the bottom. This is great as is.<br /><br />I mean... if you were to continue with this then I'd love to read it, but for your stories, writing stories without a climax works very well. ;-)Subtease2https://www.blogger.com/profile/03563952543242103371noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5762369013005547088.post-86038608359865658092016-01-25T05:47:08.511-08:002016-01-25T05:47:08.511-08:00Was wondering when you were going to break this gr...Was wondering when you were going to break this ground. Pretty amazing roll out as well. The aspect of someone being able to not fit correctly inside of the SMW is refreshing. and if you looking for a route to take from here you already established an interesting premise. The Queendoms appear like a modified monarchy. Something like Englands current system, but with actual authority under the Megumi that rule in them. Since you introduced the fundamental concept of law, the questions now becomes "Who makes the laws" and "Who enforces them?" From there you could explore what recourse can be had within the system. Did the town just decide this or was this a decry of the Queen. So far, she definitly hasn't done anything that other women have not done. And from the looks of it, no one can easily force her out. Especially with her affect on other women. Push come to shove, would a megumi actually have to step in to play sheriff? Let's not forget many women tend to not like it when others play with their toys.<br /><br />By the way, love what you did with her name. Hope implies greater things amongst bleak circumstances. And boy did you supply that from the life she currently leads foreshadowed by the life she lost. She clearly loved her husband, and as you stated he did her as well. How did it end, since he is now her ex, that means he is still amongst the living. Did he leave simply unable to endure her presence, or did she push him away out of her love for him and not wanting to be the cause of his suffering? And to tnat matter what of her son? Its nice to see you create a genuinely good hearted character again. Fingers crossed you decide to continue what clearly is riveting story.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16609899892650956704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5762369013005547088.post-50306673109968607422016-01-24T10:55:15.265-08:002016-01-24T10:55:15.265-08:00I really like this one. I like that she has a nice...I really like this one. I like that she has a nice side, unlike the total bitches you usually write about. To me, I prefer when the women tease, and can be mean, but do sometimes reward their boy toys. Most of your stories have been more over the top mean than that, which was getting redundant.YAGShttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03367287568611746492noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5762369013005547088.post-78028550995321807262016-01-23T19:48:47.019-08:002016-01-23T19:48:47.019-08:00I could see her basically establishing her own que...I could see her basically establishing her own queendom surrounding the town in response to this. Basically using her power to take over everything local. Chuckhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15437583489828606273noreply@blogger.com